Logs talk:Picnic and a Present

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Azaylia (Dragonshy (talk)) left a comment on Mon, 15 Apr 2013 06:36:45 GMT.

< Aw. <3 E'sren's family sounds big and loud and fantastic and just... to bring Sabella into it all is both wonderful (and from the look of it) jarring. XD I really enjoyed the way she received his gift, and the worry that stemmed from it. It really read as someone who's just not used to all the niceties that some folks take for granted. <3 I really enjoy reading scenes starring these two. :D