Dahlia - Revision history

Kaleidoscope at 20:36, 16 December 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 20:35, 16 December 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 20:27, 16 December 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 20:42, 4 December 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 02:34, 19 November 2015

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Kaleidoscope: Kaleidoscope moved page Dee to Dahlia over redirect

2015-10-30T21:48:37Z

Kaleidoscope moved page Dee to Dahlia over redirect

Kaleidoscope at 03:22, 17 October 2015

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K'del at 22:59, 8 October 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 18:43, 6 October 2015

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Kaleidoscope at 17:04, 6 October 2015

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+{{!}}Southern Weyr Bluerider
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+{{!}}Southern Weyr Greenrider
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 {{!}}Zezenia
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 = Family & Relationships =
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 == Description ==
-A woman of complements, that's Dee: slender yet solid, her 5'9 frame laced with work-won muscle as well as soft curves. Her face would be pale against her length of dark brown hair, if it weren't so tanned and sun-freckled; the strong angles of square jawline and short nose are rounded at chin and tip, a subtle circular beauty mark to the right of her nose further softening her overall look. All in all, she's comfortable in her body, lending her an ageless quality that suits her bright, dark-lashed hazel eyes and frequent, winsome smile.
+A woman of complements, that's Dahlia: slender yet solid, her 5'9 frame laced with work-won muscle as well as soft curves. Her face is pale against her short dark brown hair, with a light smattering of sun-freckles that've never fully faded; the strong angles of square jawline and short nose are rounded at chin and tip, a subtle circular beauty mark to the right of her nose further softening her overall look. All in all, she's comfortable in her body, lending her an ageless quality that suits her bright, dark-lashed hazel eyes and frequent, winsome smile.
-Dee generally wears her hair in a simple runner's tail, whether her attire's meant for work or otherwise. Her work clothes are a patchwork of pockets and functional loops that comprise boxy shirts and trous or coveralls, but she does love other options for other moods. Rolled-up khakis and finely knitted shirts are comfortable for the beach or really anywhere; comfortable also are her after-hours choices, scoop-neck blouses and long, light skirts in floral tones. Ever-present are her serviceable boots. Though never really clean, they pay tribute with their muddy smudges to the honest work of the day.
+Dahlia's riding leathers are practically the only element of her wardrobe that are new. The rest of her work clothes are well-tended hand-me-downs that are a patchwork of pockets and functional loops that comprise of boxy shirts and trous or coveralls, but she does love other options for other moods. Rolled-up khakis and finely knitted shirts are comfortable for the beach or really anywhere; comfortable also are her after-hours choices, scoop-neck blouses and long, light skirts in floral tones. Ever-present are her serviceable boots. Though never really clean, they pay tribute with their muddy smudges to the honest work of the day.
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 Dee's time as a candidate was transformative.  Between a landslide, a green ''betweening'' after hatching from Elaruth's clutch and choosing to stay on to Stand for Eliyaveith's eggs with its dented golden egg and covertly collaborating with her fellow candidates to try to feed a supposedly starving Hold, Dee was a different girl by the time the eggs hatched. Most unexpected was her Impression to [[Dragon:Taeliyth|Tenacity in a Tiny Gold Taeliyth]] and all the realities of that come with the life of a goldrider.
-Her time since Impression and [[Lilah]]'s rise to acting Weywroman and then vanishing has been spent thrown into learning everything she might need to know in the coming turns; despite the small hiccup of her first ''betweening'' attempt landing her in Southern Weyr's sky instead of Fort's, she can be said to be coming along nicely despite her youth (though perhaps that last is why she can also be seen sneaking out of the Weyr now and again to steal time (figuratively) to just be Dee before there's a chance that she'll need to be Weyrwoman Dahlia (forever).
+Her time since Impression and [[Lilah]]'s rise to acting Weywroman and then vanishing has been spent thrown into learning everything she might need to know in the coming turns; despite the small hiccup of her first ''betweening'' attempt landing her in Southern Weyr's sky instead of Fort's, she came out of weyrlinghood a(n arguably) promising (if ''so young'') candidate for the role of Weyrwoman. Despite her efforts to become ''better'' and more the Weyrwoman Fort would need, the unexpected hit Fort in the form of a plague. Dahlia fell ill and shortly after the Weyr Council convened and voted to throw open the Weyrwomanship of Fort to the next gold to rise.
 = Family & Relationships =

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−	~~'''[[Aislara]]''': ''Friend?'' Sometimes we seem to get each other and sometimes not. The 'not's aren't bad, just products of different experiences. We could yet be friends.~~
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−	~~'''[[C'stian]]''': ''Healer Rider.'' I feel like our Once Upon a Times are steeped in the same beginnings but our stories have already diverged.~~
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−	~~'''[[Casseny]]''': ''Curiosity.'' Our first meeting was strange. Are you, or was it only circumstance? I might not mind either way.~~
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−	~~'''[[Dimatrin]]''': ''Thinker.'' I hope you get what you want, whatever that is. I hope you'll talk to me about it when you figure it out.~~
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−	~~'''[[E'dre]]''': ''Reminder.'' If Old Guzman had been a rider... Only, you're not as growly and mean as he is. Are you sure your reputation is what you claim?~~
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−	~~'''[[E'ten]]''': ''Hematite Bronzerider.'' You seem to love your wing, or at least want to protect them. That's good, I think. Anyone should, shouldn't they?~~
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−	~~'''[[Ead]]''': ''Frustrating.'' I feel like we just don't see eye to eye even when we're on the same side with the same goals.~~
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−	~~'''[[G'vri]]''': ''Gift.'' You bring a little piece of my old life with you every time we talk and at the same time you help me see my future in a good light. Thank you for that.~~
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−	~~'''[[Hattie]]''': ''Teacher.'' You have so much experience to offer, but your life has been so different from mine, sometimes I can't translate the lessons.~~
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−	~~'''[[I'dro]]''': ''Smiles.'' If only you could time your cheerfulness better.~~
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−	~~'''[[J'zen]]''': ''Brother.'' I'll love you no matter what, but our paths don't lie together anymore; it breaks my heart. I wish you well.~~
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−	'''[[Lilah]]''': ''Mystery.'' I don't think you would have left this to me, if you'd had a choice. I don't think you meant to leave us. I wish I'd known you better to know what to say to everyone who did.
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−	'''[[K'del]]''': ''Mentor.'' You're a good person and you have experience doing what I might need to do, to lead young, to try not to make mistakes. I value your insight and the safe space you create for me.
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−	'''[[Ka'ge]]''': ''Enigma (Still).'' Some days I like you, some days I wish you were better, some days I don't know you at all. It's a fraught path for us, but I'm willing to try even if I'm not willing to commit.
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−	'''[[N'dalis]]''': ''Good guy.'' You seem like a nice man. Your son loves you very much and you seem to care about people. That's all ''very good'' in my book. <strike>If only you weren't a traitor, you traitor.</strike>
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−	'''N'jem''': ''Father.'' This wasn't the path you wanted for me. I think you're sorry for that now. I don't hold it against you. This was my choice. Just let the new little one choose their own path, Dad.
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−	~~'''[[N'rov]]''': ''Friend.'' You might wish you never told my fortune; now we're friends and you'll never be rid of me (or the favors I ask).~~
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−	'''[[Paislie]]''': ''Regret.'' I'm sorry I failed you so spectacularly. Maybe there was nothing I could have done to help you in the end, but I wish things had turned out differently, for everyone, but you especially.
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−	~~'''[[R'oan]]''': ''Comrade.'' You make a safe-space to just let go. To drink, to forget, to bitch and empathize about the prisons we cannot break free of. At least there's a nice view.~~
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−	~~'''[[Rhiannon]]''': ''Acquaintance.'' It's nice that I'm not the only one still learning and I think it'll be nice to work with you.~~
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−	~~'''[[X'vin]]''': ''Thoughtful.'' You seem to want the best for me and for Fort. I'd like your help and advice.~~
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−	~~'''[[Z'riah]]''': ''Greenrider.'' It was nice of you to help me out, to offer me advice from your experience, but I might be too nice to take it.~~
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−	~~'''Zennia''': ''Mother.'' I love you. Thank you for helping me to find my home, for teaching me I can take what's important with me. I'm going to love being a big sister again.~~

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 == Description ==

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 = History =
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 Still, by the time she was twelve, Dee had convinced him of her dedication and drive to learn and he (reluctantly) agreed to take her on as his apprentice. For the next five turns, the girl was as devoted a student as Guzman might have wished for (except when Jem coaxed her off the straight and narrow to throw caution and responsibility to the wind). She spent months here and there at the Hall attending classes that Guzman insisted she needed other teachers for. The first time she went to the Hall, she almost chose to ''stay''. Nerat was beautiful, and the Hall well-equipped, staffed, and there was ''so much knowledge'' all in ''one place''! It excited her more than it probably should have, but she couldn't bear the thought of staying so far from her home.
-Life at home fell into well-managed patterns. Jem could keep his chaos (and drag her along into it sometimes), Dee ''liked'' routine. She liked study and stealing time to go catch (imaginary) "moonfish" for wishes in the summer surf. She liked talking to the plants, singing to them, and helping Old Guzman for all that his demeanor got worse every turn. His sourness and negativity had no hold on her optimistic spirit. As far as Dee was concerned, ''life is good''...
+Life at home fell into well-managed patterns. Jem could keep his chaos (and drag her along into it sometimes), Dee ''liked'' routine. She liked study and stealing time to go catch (imaginary) "moonfish" for wishes in the summer surf. She liked talking to the plants, singing to them, and helping Old Guzman for all that his demeanor got worse every turn. His sourness and negativity had no hold on her optimistic spirit. As far as Dee was concerned, ''life was good''...
-... was good. It ''was'' good. Until Jem took it into his head to ''volunteer'' to go to Fort Weyr, where he would be expected to Stand as a candidate for Elaruth's clutch, if asked. Until her father used her love for him to get her to go, to keep him out of trouble and bring him home safely, if he didn't find a lifemate on the Sands. Until he used it to get her to go to Fort where she would be expected to accept an offer to Stand, too, an offer she couldn't-- ''wouldn't'' be able to refuse for the honor of her home. Now? There is no routine to follow. She can only hope for the best.
+... ''was'' good. It ''was'' good. Until Jem took it into his head to ''volunteer'' to go to Fort Weyr, where he would be expected to Stand as a candidate for Elaruth's clutch, if asked. Until her father used her love for him to get her to go, to keep him out of trouble and bring him home safely, if he didn't find a lifemate on the Sands. Until he used it to get her to go to Fort where she would be expected to accept an offer to Stand, too, an offer she couldn't-- ''wouldn't'' be able to refuse for the honor of her home.
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-'''[[C'stian]]''': ''Healer Rider.''  I feel like our Once Upon a Times are steeped in the same beginnings. Our stories have already diverged. Will mine be like yours in the end?
+'''[[Aislara]]''': ''Friend?''  Sometimes we seem to get each other and sometimes not. The 'not's aren't bad, just products of different experiences. We could yet be friends.
 '''[[Casseny]]''': ''Curiosity.''  Our first meeting was strange. Are you, or was it only circumstance? I might not mind either way.
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 '''[[Dimatrin]]''': ''Thinker.''  I hope you get what you want, whatever that is. I hope you'll talk to me about it when you figure it out.
-'''[[E'dre]]''': ''Reminder.'' If Old Guzman had been a rider... Only, you're not as growly and mean as he is. Are you sure your reputation is what you claim?
+'''[[E'dre]]''': ''Reminder.''  If Old Guzman had been a rider... Only, you're not as growly and mean as he is. Are you sure your reputation is what you claim?
-'''[[E'ten]]''': ''Hematite Bronzerider.'' You seem to love your wing, or at least want to protect them. That's good, I think. Anyone should, shouldn't they?
+'''[[I'dro]]''': ''Smiles.''  If only you could time your cheerfulness better.
-'''[[Eadgyd]]''': ''Uncertainty.'' Mights and maybes are terrible in the face of shoulds, but you're in the barracks now, so maybe you've decided rightly after all.
+'''[[J'zen]]''': ''Brother.''  I'll love you no matter what, but our paths don't lie together anymore; it breaks my heart. I wish you well.
-'''[[Hattie]]''': ''Leader.''  You have so many challenges and so much experience. I could learn so much from you, if you'll let me.
+'''[[Lilah]]''': ''Mystery.''  I don't think you would have left this to me, if you'd had a choice. I don't think you meant to leave us. I wish I'd known you better to know what to say to everyone who did.
-'''[[I'dro]]''': ''Smiles.''  If only you could time your cheerfulness better. We could even be friends!
+'''[[K'del]]''': ''Mentor.''  You're a good person and you have experience doing what I might need to do, to lead young, to try not to make mistakes. I value your insight and the safe space you create for me.
-'''[[J'zen]]''': ''Brother.''  I'll love you no matter what, but... will you ever learn?
+'''[[Ka'ge]]''': ''Enigma (Still).''  Some days I like you, some days I wish you were better, some days I don't know you at all. It's a fraught path for us, but I'm willing to try even if I'm not willing to commit.
-'''[[Lilah]]''': ''Cynic.''  Where is your sense of fun? Of adventure? What has happened in your life to make you as you are? You need a Jem.
+'''[[N'dalis]]''': ''Good guy.''  You seem like a nice man. Your son loves you very much and you seem to care about people. That's all ''very good'' in my book. <strike>If only you weren't a traitor, you traitor.</strike>
-'''[[Ka'ge]]''': ''Enigma.''  Like my brother, and yet so unlike. I think there's so much more to you, under the hood. Will you let me peek? Do I even want to know?
+'''N'jem''': ''Father.''  This wasn't the path you wanted for me. I think you're sorry for that now. I don't hold it against you. This was my choice. Just let the new little one choose their own path, Dad.
-'''N'jem''': ''Father.''  I see the path you laid for me. I know I'm walking on it now, but I may yet choose my own way. I hope you'll still love me if I do.
+'''[[N'rov]]''': ''Friend.''  You might wish you never told my fortune; now we're friends and you'll never be rid of me (or the favors I ask).
-'''[[N'rov]]''': ''Mystic.''  Tell me more stories like the last. I'll always wish to believe in magic.
+'''[[Paislie]]''': ''Regret.''  I'm sorry I failed you so spectacularly. Maybe there was nothing I could have done to help you in the end, but I wish things had turned out differently, for everyone, but you especially.
-'''[[R'oan]]''': ''Old.''  Age is nothing to be ashamed of; why are you?
+'''[[R'oan]]''': ''Comrade.'' You make a safe-space to just let go. To drink, to forget, to bitch and empathize about the prisons we cannot break free of. At least there's a nice view.
-'''[[Rasaid]]''': ''New.''  Welcome to the nuthou--er, barracks, candidate! I'll smile more next time.
+'''[[Rhiannon]]''': ''Acquaintance.''  It's nice that I'm not the only one still learning and I think it'll be nice to work with you.
-'''[[Sigrid]]''': ''Friendly.''  I like your dreams. I'll taste-test anything you like if it will help you achieve them.
+'''[[X'vin]]''': ''Thoughtful.''  You seem to want the best for me and for Fort. I'd like your help and advice.
-'''[[Yarovai]]''': ''Good.''  You seem wholesome and kind. It's relaxing and refreshing.
+'''[[Z'riah]]''': ''Greenrider.'' It was nice of you to help me out, to offer me advice from your experience, but I might be too nice to take it.
-'''Zennia''': ''Mother.''  I know you only want the best for me. Is what you want the best for me, though?
+'''Zennia''': ''Mother.''  I love you. Thank you for helping me to find my home, for teaching me I can take what's important with me. I'm going to love being a big sister again.
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 == Description ==
 A woman of complements, that's Dee: slender yet solid, her 5'9 frame laced with work-won muscle as well as soft curves. Her face would be pale against her length of dark brown hair, if it weren't so tanned and sun-freckled; the strong angles of square jawline and short nose are rounded at chin and tip, a subtle circular beauty mark to the right of her nose further softening her overall look. All in all, she's comfortable in her body, lending her an ageless quality that suits her bright, dark-lashed hazel eyes and frequent, winsome smile.
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 Dee generally wears her hair in a simple runner's tail, whether her attire's meant for work or otherwise. Her work clothes are a patchwork of pockets and functional loops that comprise boxy shirts and trous or coveralls, but she does love other options for other moods. Rolled-up khakis and finely knitted shirts are comfortable for the beach or really anywhere; comfortable also are her after-hours choices, scoop-neck blouses and long, light skirts in floral tones. Ever-present are her serviceable boots. Though never really clean, they pay tribute with their muddy smudges to the honest work of the day.
-== History ==
+{{wysk}}
 Born to bluerider N'jem and greenrider Zennia of Southern Weyr, Dahlia is the product of a happy weyrmating. Though there were unhappy moments, as in every life a little rain must fall, her childhood was largely happy. Jemizen, Dahlia's not-even-a-turn younger brother who dubbed her Dee from their earliest babbling, brought only a quarter (perhaps ''half'') as much trouble as he did joy, so as her constant companion and best friend, he was forgiven all the extra chores, scoldings and scrapes she found herself with.
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 ... was good. It ''was'' good. Until Jem took it into his head to ''volunteer'' to go to Fort Weyr, where he would be expected to Stand as a candidate for Elaruth's clutch, if asked. Until her father used her love for him to get her to go, to keep him out of trouble and bring him home safely, if he didn't find a lifemate on the Sands. Until he used it to get her to go to Fort where she would be expected to accept an offer to Stand, too, an offer she couldn't-- ''wouldn't'' be able to refuse for the honor of her home. Now? There is no routine to follow. She can only hope for the best.
-== Relationships ==
+= Family & Relationships =
 '''[[C'stian]]''': ''Healer Rider.''  I feel like our Once Upon a Times are steeped in the same beginnings. Our stories have already diverged. Will mine be like yours in the end?
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 '''Zennia''': ''Mother.''  I know you only want the best for me. Is what you want the best for me, though?
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