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-|mother=NPC - Journeywoman Smithcrafter
+|mother=NPC - Ex-Journeywoman Smithcrafter
 |father=NPC - "Blackmarket" trader
 |siblings=None
 |children=None
-|body=== Description ==
+|body= Description =
 While her body seems slender and lithe, runner's leg muscles and a sparrer's arms add a little 'something' to her contour which would otherwise seem relatively plain and flat, fitting of one so stern. The palms of her hands and the soles of her feet are rough and calloused, and bruises can be spotted here and there upon rather pale skin that has seen far more snow and mountains than sun-lit beach. There are two heavy scars that mar her form- one between her shoulder blades, the other over her right bicep. Numerous lighter scars trek down her forearms, hands and legs and appear wholly superficial and of varying age.
-Reaching an average height of about 5'7", her stature really does not scream much of a domineering personality. However, her well-sculpted hardly hued face appears naturally stuck and rigid in the same exact non-expression. Set, critical eyes that are so light blue they appear silver-grey stare out of heavily lashed lids. Dark brown hair that varies between looking almost black in dim light to shinning golden-brown in bright light has been cut crudely. What may have remained as shoulder-length at best is collected in a tight bun on the back of her head.
+Reaching an average height of about 5'7", her stature really does not scream much of a domineering personality. However, her well-sculpted hardly hued face appears naturally stuck and rigid in the same exact non-expression. Set, critical eyes that are so light blue they appear silver-grey stare out of heavily lashed lids. Dark brown hair that varies between looking almost black in dim light to shinning golden-brown in bright had at once been cut short, but has started to gain some length to it as time has passed, regaining some of the natural curls of it. However, much more often than demonstrating what might be pretty, it's collected in a tight bun on the back of her head.
-A tan tunic is modified into a heavy wrap-around top with a thick black boarder, combined at the waist with a wide belly-wrap. The white half-sleeves at the shoulders and central wrap are lined by a furred trimming. Her pants are a white, tough material with heavier patches at the knees. Arms from elbow to mid-fingers are wrapped with 1" strips of cloth beneath heavy leather forearm guards that are long enough to cover the back of her hands. When not restricted by formality, her obsession with "all things sharp" may be somewhat apparent with a single high-quality belt knife at her hip, and more likely a couple more of different styles stashed secretly upon on her person.
+A tan tunic is modified into a heavy wrap-around top with a thick black boarder, combined at the waist with a wide belly-wrap. The white half-sleeves at the shoulders and central wrap are lined by a furred trimming. The flight jacket that often covers it is a deep almost-black that has seen its share of days, worn in spots but still functional. Her pants are a sandy off-white, tough material with heavier patches at the knees. Arms from elbow to mid-fingers are wrapped with 1" strips of cloth beneath heavy leather forearm guards that are long enough to cover the back of her hands.  A particularly well-made belt knife sits at her lower back, and may not be the only piece of steel on her. A dragonrider's knot is fastened to her shoulder only while within the Weyr proper, intertwined with the hues of High Reaches and the brown of her lifemate.
-== WYSK ==
+= WYSK =
    * Pronounced Ke-si
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-== History ==
+= History =
 Keysi is of Tillek Hold birth, given a Smith-trained journeywoman mother and a father of much more questionable means who bided by the title of trader. But what /did/ he trade? He never shared that information. Her father was one of many vices- from drinking and gambling to underhanded dealings that left her mother in a sticky situation when his ways were questioned. Eventually, the man was all but exiled- unofficially ''asked'' to leave when Keysi had just turned 3 turns old. From there, they traveled with different caravans, seeking to transplant themselves into Hold or Hall that needed a Smith's works, and found nobody accepting of them as whispers of her fathers dealings seemed to precede him. Could it be anything but a set up? Black mail?
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 Nearly healed by time of hatching, Keysi Impresses to Mysteries of Harmony Brown Neianth of Niavhth and Reisoth's clutch M7T36, not a day after getting into a near-fight with Reisoth's rider. Weyrlinghood proved a time of growth and inner reflection, of self-question and loyalty evaluation. She realized she's been running, hiding. It's after graduation, when she's tapped into Savannah with R'hin that she turns to face her demons.
-== Firelizard ==
+= Firelizard =
 Blue '''Shen'''
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 * ''Inspiration:'' From Greek mythology's Boreas (Aquilo), the North Wind. The bringer of winter, the devourer, coming down from the north to chill the air relentlessly with his icy breath. He was personified as purple-winged, very strong, and with a violent temper.
-== Relationships ==
+= Relationships =
 * '''Alida''' ''respect'' "More than simply a friend of a friend, important in your own way."
 * '''Edyis''' ''drifting'' "I still consider you my friend. But I'm changing. Don't forget about me while I figure all this out."
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 * '''R'hin''' ''catalyst'' "It took me time to trust you. You broke every rule, but you opened every door. I ''will'' be more. You didn't choose wrong."
-== Sound Tracks ==
+= Media =
 '''Keysi'''
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4bQsQUdkmY Awake and Alive - Skillet]
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k7pmQxTtmw The Hell Song - Sum41]
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFgozleeawE Lose Yourself - Eminem]
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 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNV_sbBrxMQ&index=8&list=PLkOJB9BEJFI333x1obNnanan8DDs6QEGE Kung Fu Panda Instrumentals]
-== RP Logs ==
+== Extras ==
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-== Extras ==
-* [https://scontent-sea1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xta1/v/t1.0-9/12006158_1359865107376272_4569562618017696234_n.jpg?oh=a03e3db36fa71c7c54844d90b492acd3&oe=56A0232B A visual of the pair's outlook on danger], provided lovingly by Faryn.
-* [http://kevan.org/jh/keysihrw Johari]
-* [http://kevan.org/nohari?name=KeysiHRW Nohari]
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 |Has rank=Weyrling

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 == Firelizard ==
-Spirit of the North Wind Blue Shen
+Blue '''Shen'''
 Square-jawed, barrel-chested, and compact of torso, this prodigious blue is all lines and angles, his neck ridges jagged-looking, eye-ridges prominent. Grandiose wings are a surprising shade of glacial blue that eddies into snow-devils of chill indigo upon wingsails' trailing edges. The bulk of his hide is a frenzied, chaotic winterscape of every shade and tint of an arctic storm; gelid gusts of pale sapphire rushing from shorter neck and down shoulders over his back, while random stipples of whitish-blue suggest ice and snow upon flanks. Frozen-seeming claws of an indigo so pale as to appear white suggest the pristine, latent threat of icicles... perhaps echoed by the rather aggressive cant of short headknobs and his rather bold posture.
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 * ''Sire:'' Jo's Mime
 * ''Hatch Date:'' 23D 11M 38T I10
-* ''Name:'' Chinese Medicine considers Shen to be one of the "three treasures" that constitute life: Jing, the essence; Qi, the life force; and Shen, the spirit.  This spirit manifests as our wisdom, emotional well being, and ability to see all sides of an issue. It contributes to wisdom, virtue, and calmness, and maintains our whole being in order.
+* ''Name:'' Chinese Medicine considers Shen to be one of the "three treasures" that constitute life: Jing, the essence; Qi, the life force; and Shen, the spirit.
-* ''Inspiration:'' Greek Mythology's Boreas/Aquilo, the North Wind. Purple-winged; god of winter, chilling the air with icy breath; very strong, with a violent temper.
+* ''Inspiration:'' From Greek mythology's Boreas (Aquilo), the North Wind. The bringer of winter, the devourer, coming down from the north to chill the air relentlessly with his icy breath. He was personified as purple-winged, very strong, and with a violent temper.
 == Relationships ==
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 * '''Quinlys''' ''passionate'' "I don't think we'll ever see eye to eye, and it frustrates me that I can't appreciate your passion."
 * '''R'van''' ''trouble-starter'' "We certainly don't agree. But I will try to find something to respect."
-* '''R'hin''' ''pillar, catalyst'' "It took me time to trust you. You broke every rule, but you opened every door. You illuminated the spark. I ''will'' be more. You didn't choose wrong."
+* '''R'hin''' ''catalyst'' "It took me time to trust you. You broke every rule, but you opened every door. I ''will'' be more. You didn't choose wrong."
 == Sound Tracks ==
 '''Keysi'''
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k7pmQxTtmw The Hell Song - Sum41 (Life struggles)]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4bQsQUdkmY Awake and Alive - Skillet]
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFgozleeawE Lose Yourself - Eminem (You've got one shot)]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2k7pmQxTtmw The Hell Song - Sum41]
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lkrLfl-npY4 Awake and Alive - Skillet (Impression)]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFgozleeawE Lose Yourself - Eminem]
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_eI_8SQwsjA Not Afraid - Eminem]
 '''Neianth'''
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAwWPadFsOA Mortal Kombat - Theme Song]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAwWPadFsOA Mortal Kombat]
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zS1xjS_LTyo Pump it - Black Eyed Peas]
 * [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ms5mSDy59eM Remember the Name - Fort Minor]
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EK2UYoz8azo Hall of Fame - The Script (Impression... and every day since)]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EK2UYoz8azo Hall of Fame - The Script]
+* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNV_sbBrxMQ&index=8&list=PLkOJB9BEJFI333x1obNnanan8DDs6QEGE Kung Fu Panda Instrumentals]
-−
-'''Hidden Secrets Weyr'''
-* [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dNV_sbBrxMQ&index=8&list=PLkOJB9BEJFI333x1obNnanan8DDs6QEGE Sacred Pool of Tears]
 == RP Logs ==

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 Nearly healed by time of hatching, Keysi Impresses to Mysteries of Harmony Brown Neianth of Niavhth and Reisoth's clutch M7T36, not a day after getting into a near-fight with Reisoth's rider. Weyrlinghood proved a time of growth and inner reflection, of self-question and loyalty evaluation. She realized she's been running, hiding. It's after graduation, when she's tapped into Savannah with R'hin that she turns to face her demons.
-== Spirit of the North Wind Blue Shen ==
+== Firelizard ==
 Square-jawed, barrel-chested, and compact of torso, this prodigious blue is all lines and angles, his neck ridges jagged-looking, eye-ridges prominent. Grandiose wings are a surprising shade of glacial blue that eddies into snow-devils of chill indigo upon wingsails' trailing edges. The bulk of his hide is a frenzied, chaotic winterscape of every shade and tint of an arctic storm; gelid gusts of pale sapphire rushing from shorter neck and down shoulders over his back, while random stipples of whitish-blue suggest ice and snow upon flanks. Frozen-seeming claws of an indigo so pale as to appear white suggest the pristine, latent threat of icicles... perhaps echoed by the rather aggressive cant of short headknobs and his rather bold posture.
 == Relationships ==

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	Nearly healed by time of hatching, Keysi Impresses to Mysteries of Harmony Brown Neianth of Niavhth and Reisoth's clutch M7T36, not a day after getting into a near-fight with Reisoth's rider. Weyrlinghood proved a time of growth and inner reflection, of self-question and loyalty evaluation. She realized she's been running, hiding. It's after graduation, when she's tapped into Savannah with R'hin that she turns to face her demons.		Nearly healed by time of hatching, Keysi Impresses to Mysteries of Harmony Brown Neianth of Niavhth and Reisoth's clutch M7T36, not a day after getting into a near-fight with Reisoth's rider. Weyrlinghood proved a time of growth and inner reflection, of self-question and loyalty evaluation. She realized she's been running, hiding. It's after graduation, when she's tapped into Savannah with R'hin that she turns to face her demons.
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		+	== Spirit of the North Wind Blue Shen ==
		+	Square-jawed, barrel-chested, and compact of torso, this prodigious blue is all lines and angles, his neck ridges jagged-looking, eye-ridges prominent. Grandiose wings are a surprising shade of glacial blue that eddies into snow-devils of chill indigo upon wingsails' trailing edges. The bulk of his hide is a frenzied, chaotic winterscape of every shade and tint of an arctic storm; gelid gusts of pale sapphire rushing from shorter neck and down shoulders over his back, while random stipples of whitish-blue suggest ice and snow upon flanks. Frozen-seeming claws of an indigo so pale as to appear white suggest the pristine, latent threat of icicles... perhaps echoed by the rather aggressive cant of short headknobs and his rather bold posture.

	== Relationships ==		== Relationships ==

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 == WYSK ==
-Pronounced Ke-si (Que Si)
+  * Pronounced Ke-si
-Nicknames: "Keys" "Key"
+  * Most of her history goes untold, but it is known that she traveled a
 == History ==

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 == History ==
-Keysi is of Tillek Hold birth, given a Smith-trained journeywoman mother and a father of much more questionable means who bided by the title of trader. Her father was one of many vices- from drinking and gambling to underhanded dealings that left her mother in a sticky situation when his ways were questioned by her grandparents and other non-blooded acquaintances. They stayed at the Hold for as long as the critical whisperings were tolerable, which gave Keysi until around 5 turns of age of a stable situation. From there, they would transplant themselves into whatever Hold or Hall required a Smith's works, her mother's master an overly understanding man who loved her as dearly as a sister. With Keysi always in a relatively dangerous situation just on the outskirts of her father's dealings, her mother spent her extra marks on trainings with the guards for the young girl, and always had a short bladed dagger nearby.
+Keysi is of Tillek Hold birth, given a Smith-trained journeywoman mother and a father of much more questionable means who bided by the title of trader. But what /did/ he trade? He never shared that information. Her father was one of many vices- from drinking and gambling to underhanded dealings that left her mother in a sticky situation when his ways were questioned. Eventually, the man was all but exiled- unofficially ''asked'' to leave when Keysi had just turned 3 turns old. From there, they traveled with different caravans, seeking to transplant themselves into Hold or Hall that needed a Smith's works, and found nobody accepting of them as whispers of her fathers dealings seemed to precede him. Could it be anything but a set up? Black mail?
-Once old enough, her mother urged her to settle somewhere to be safer and, being Craft-minded herself, fronted an apprenticeship in Healing for the girl who already seemed so serious and driven to complete momentous tasks. She spent three long studious turns at the HealerHall at Fort, her pressure on her peers to always do better not lending itself well to making many close friends. Now at 16 and some turns, her selection for posting sent her to the unforgiving surrounding peaks of High Reaches Weyr.
+Their caravan was intermittently intercepted in-route of wherever her mother could find work, or her father had a meeting to sell his 'goods'. With Keysi always in a relatively dangerous situation just on the outskirts of her father's dealings, her mother spent her extra marks on training for the young girl- with guards, with vagabonds, with people who were probably convicts but would do anything for payment.
 == Relationships ==
 * '''Alida''' ''respect'' "More than simply a friend of a friend, important in your own way."
-* '''Edyis''' ''similar souls'' "I think you may be the first friend I've ever wanted to have."
+* '''Edyis''' ''drifting'' "I still consider you my friend. But I'm changing. Don't forget about me while I figure all this out."
-* '''Farideh''' ''interesting'' "I'm not sure I even have the right words yet."
+* '''Farideh''' ''work in progress'' "You can do this. For better or for worse, I'm here to help you."
 * '''H'vier''' ''frustrating'' "He makes it very hard to respect authority."
-* '''K'del''' ''idol'' "He's been there.. when I've needed it. Twice. Even as just an apprentice. I owe him."
+* '''K'del''' ''idol'' "You've been there. I will do absolutely everything necessary for you. For the Weyr. I will not let you down."
-* '''Lycinea''' ''emergency-besties'' "Sensitive. I'll do what I can."
+* '''K'zin''' ''observant'' "Once, I thought you were just an empty-headed prettyboy. But you spoke my language, you changed everything in my weyrlinghood, diverting a destructive path."
 * '''Quinlys''' ''passionate'' "I don't think we'll ever see eye to eye, and it frustrates me that I can't appreciate your passion."
 * '''R'van''' ''trouble-starter'' "We certainly don't agree. But I will try to find something to respect."
-* '''R'hin''' ''pillar'' "I don't know how or why I trust you but... I do."
+* '''R'hin''' ''pillar, catalyst'' "It took me time to trust you. You broke every rule, but you opened every door. You illuminated the spark. I ''will'' be more. You didn't choose wrong."
-* '''Z'kiel''' ''cryptic'' "Something of a reflection of myself, you're hiding many stories. I will not pry, but I also will not look away."
 == Sound Tracks ==
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