Logs:Death in the Family, Part 1 - Revision history

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	He returned to High Reaches three days later, clean-shaven and… well clean, with apology darkening his hazel eyes when he sought out his ''wife''.		He returned to High Reaches three days later, clean-shaven and… well clean, with apology darkening his hazel eyes when he sought out his ''wife''.
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-“How are you?'' he had just left her sister, having spied his brother and his ex-wife not so far away. Not having the courage to face them still, particularly not without Leova at his side, Anvori had run.
+"How are you?" he had just left her sister, having spied his brother and his ex-wife not so far away. Not having the courage to face them still, particularly not without Leova at his side, Anvori had run.
-Riahla, sitting in one of his mother’s armchairs, looked up at her uncle, and with astute eyes asked an arch, “How are ''you''?''
+Riahla, sitting in one of his mother’s armchairs, looked up at her uncle, and with astute eyes asked an arch, "How are ''you''?"
-“You’re not with Suireh,'' is what he said in return, causing the young woman to press her lips thin and dart a look where her darker other half stood, making small talk with Onuela.
+"You’re not with Suireh," is what he said in return, causing the young woman to press her lips thin and dart a look where her darker other half stood, making small talk with Onuela.
-“No…'' It was a sad, reflective answer.
+"No…" It was a sad, reflective answer.
-Anvori had followed her gaze and watched his niece speak with the woman who he had once thought he’d follow to the ends of the world. “I thought I was over that. You know.'' When Riahla failed to interrupt, or even move, he continued. “Thought I could face it and smile after all these years. No hard feelings.''
+Anvori had followed her gaze and watched his niece speak with the woman who he had once thought he’d follow to the ends of the world. "I thought I was over that. You know." When Riahla failed to interrupt, or even move, he continued. "Thought I could face it and smile after all these years. No hard feelings."
-He had given her the opening, and she took it, “Is that why Leova isn’t here with you?''
+He had given her the opening, and she took it, "Is that why Leova isn’t here with you?"
-Anvori’s silence was enough, he hoped, to answer her question. It must have been. He heard her rise, and felt her rider-strong arms wrap about his waist in a one-armed hug. “Hang in there, kid,'' she said. And he felt a laugh escape and gave her a ''look''. Kid, indeed.
+Anvori’s silence was enough, he hoped, to answer her question. It must have been. He heard her rise, and felt her rider-strong arms wrap about his waist in a one-armed hug. "Hang in there, kid," she said. And he felt a laugh escape and gave her a ''look''. Kid, indeed.
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 So alike, his mother had oft remarked, and now, he could see it, perhaps too late.
-His father and he had never gotten along like he and his mother had, but the news of his death had jolted Anvori to the core, and though it had seemed the right thing to do at the time, he could still see Leova’s eyes, ”those eyes”, when he said he’d be going alone. His hand clenched, crumpling the fabric of his hands where he clutched. He could use her here right now, in a way he hadn’t thought he might. The distraction of Via in his arms would also be welcome. There was an ache in his chest that had very little to do with his father.
+His father and he had never gotten along like he and his mother had, but the news of his death had jolted Anvori to the core, and though it had seemed the right thing to do at the time, he could still see Leova’s eyes, ''those eyes'', when he said he’d be going alone. His hand clenched, crumpling the fabric of his hands where he clutched. He could use her here right now, in a way he hadn’t thought he might. The distraction of Via in his arms would also be welcome. There was an ache in his chest that had very little to do with his father.
 There were no public tears. It wasn’t the Sea’s Peak way.
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 He took the steps up into the high cliff hold two by two, letting Riahla and Suireh guide his aging mother up. It had been his task, more than a decade ago, to help Veylin up. He hadn’t liked realizing, while no one else did, that his mother needed him, and that her knees, weak from the grief she couldn’t express, were wobbly, even as she feigned strength.
-Behind him, he heard Riahla, her voice still charismatically animated, even when respectfully low for the circumstances. She had inflections and cadences much like her father. ”Had R’hin ever visited? Ever met Veylin? Either of his parents or any of his family other than him?” It was a thought that evoked a rueful smile.
+Behind him, he heard Riahla, her voice still charismatically animated, even when respectfully low for the circumstances. She had inflections and cadences much like her father. ''Had R’hin ever visited? Ever met Veylin? Either of his parents or any of his family other than him?'' It was a thought that evoked a rueful smile.
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-“How are you?” he had just left her sister, having spied his brother and his ex-wife not so far away. Not having the courage to face them still, particularly not without Leova at his side, Anvori had run.
+“How are you?'' he had just left her sister, having spied his brother and his ex-wife not so far away. Not having the courage to face them still, particularly not without Leova at his side, Anvori had run.
-Riahla, sitting in one of his mother’s armchairs, looked up at her uncle, and with astute eyes asked an arch, “How are ”you”?”
+Riahla, sitting in one of his mother’s armchairs, looked up at her uncle, and with astute eyes asked an arch, “How are ''you''?''
-“You’re not with Suireh,” is what he said in return, causing the young woman to press her lips thin and dart a look where her darker other half stood, making small talk with Onuela.
+“You’re not with Suireh,'' is what he said in return, causing the young woman to press her lips thin and dart a look where her darker other half stood, making small talk with Onuela.
-“No…” It was a sad, reflective answer.
+“No…'' It was a sad, reflective answer.
-Anvori had followed her gaze and watched his niece speak with the woman who he had once thought he’d follow to the ends of the world. “I thought I was over that. You know.” When Riahla failed to interrupt, or even move, he continued. “Thought I could face it and smile after all these years. No hard feelings.”
+Anvori had followed her gaze and watched his niece speak with the woman who he had once thought he’d follow to the ends of the world. “I thought I was over that. You know.'' When Riahla failed to interrupt, or even move, he continued. “Thought I could face it and smile after all these years. No hard feelings.''
-He had given her the opening, and she took it, “Is that why Leova isn’t here with you?”
+He had given her the opening, and she took it, “Is that why Leova isn’t here with you?''
-Anvori’s silence was enough, he hoped, to answer her question. It must have been. He heard her rise, and felt her rider-strong arms wrap about his waist in a one-armed hug. “Hang in there, kid,” she said. And he felt a laugh escape and gave her a ”look”. Kid, indeed.
+Anvori’s silence was enough, he hoped, to answer her question. It must have been. He heard her rise, and felt her rider-strong arms wrap about his waist in a one-armed hug. “Hang in there, kid,'' she said. And he felt a laugh escape and gave her a ''look''. Kid, indeed.
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