Logs talk:Long Day, Poor Decision - Revision history

Kaleidoscope at 16:21, 28 June 2015

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==Alida (00:13, 7 June 2015 (EDT)) said... ==

Uh-oh. Temptation...

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 ==Kaleidoscope (01:17, 8 June 2015 (EDT)) said... ==
-There is so much good and fun here. So interesting to see how the various plot lines overlap!  I especially loved the pacing and flow of this scene (loved it to the point that it kept me awake to read all the way to the end and say so at Very Late o'clock). I think the pacing and flow was made all the more smooth by the sharp contrast of the screeching halt at the end. Good for you, Lilah, keeping K'del on his toes! That'll learn him to be all kind and considerate and a good friend! ;D
+There is so much good and fun here. So interesting to see how the various plot lines overlap!  I especially loved the pacing and flow of this scene (loved it to the point that it kept me awake to read all the way to the end and say so at Very Late o'clock). I think the pacing and flow was made all the more smooth by the sharp contrast of the screeching halt at the end. Good for you, Lilah, keeping K'del on his toes! That'll learn him to be all kind and considerate and a good friend! ;D <3
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		+	==Kaleidoscope (01:17, 8 June 2015 (EDT)) said... ==
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		+	There is so much good and fun here. So interesting to see how the various plot lines overlap! I especially loved the pacing and flow of this scene (loved it to the point that it kept me awake to read all the way to the end and say so at Very Late o'clock). I think the pacing and flow was made all the more smooth by the sharp contrast of the screeching halt at the end. Good for you, Lilah, keeping K'del on his toes! That'll learn him to be all kind and considerate and a good friend! ;D
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		+	==R'hin (02:18, 7 June 2015 (EDT)) said... ==
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		+	Drinking clearly leads to Bad Decision Lilah. files this away for later