T'gar - Revision history

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Jolie at 06:39, 13 December 2015

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K'del at 22:42, 29 November 2015

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Jolie at 00:16, 2 November 2015

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Jolie at 00:14, 2 November 2015

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K'del: K'del moved page Rategar to T'gar

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Jolie at 21:00, 22 October 2015

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 *[[Ellerey]]: "We're the only ones whose dragons are....."<br>
 *[[Jocelyn]]: "Frigid. Wonder what a smile on you looks like."<br>
-*[[N'klas]]: "Weyrleader's kid. You're alright with me."<br>
+*[[N'klas]]: "Weyrleader's kid. It's good to have a good, normal friend."<br>
 *[[L'ton]]: "Another bronzerider."<br>
 *[[Lys]]: "Dare I say....we could be ''friends''?"<br>
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 *[[Quinlys]]: "I might be rough around the edges, and you might be out of my league, but something keeps drawing me back to you. I won't let go until you do."<br>
 *[[Dahlia]]: "A weyrwoman that doesn't have a stick up her ass. For the moment, I enjoy us."<br>
-*[[Farideh]]: "Fort Weyrwoman. I actually enjoy making you boil, but the only reason I don't take it too far is because of Drex."<br>
+*[[C'ris]]: "I know what you want with her. Are you sure she wants the same thing, too?"<br>
 *[[K'del]]: "Weyrleader. I really don't get why you get a bad rap. The fact that I can relate to you makes me torn in my loyalties - but no one will ever know."<br>
 *[[H'vier]]: "Sorry you died, man. You seemed alright."<br>
 *[[Edyis]]: "Curious brownrider. Nice."<br>
 *[[Telavi]]: "You're a sweetheart."<br>

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 *  Has a face of an asshole. Probably is one.
 *''' Inspiration:''' Think of Gossip Girl's '''Chuck Bass''', only more "jock-like" and less richly-made. Don't judge me.
 =History=

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 == WYSK ==
 *  Goes by Rat.
-*  Works in the stables and it seems like he's not a stranger to heavy work.
+*  Worked in the stables before Impression, and it seems like he's not a stranger to heavy work.
 *  Claims he's from Bitra with an accent to boot. Sometimes that accents changes to one from Crom.
 *  His nose looks like it's been broken many times.
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 =History=
-== "His" story (the story he tells everyone) ==
+== "His" story (the story/stories he tells everyone) ==
 * He's related to Lord Bitra, distantly.
 * Got unfairly kicked out of the smithcrafthall for a crime he didn't commit. The ones that did are still there.
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 * Was eventually banned from Crom Hold for fighting too much (and his temper), despite his aunt's efforts to overturn it.
 * Is known in certain circles to fight regularly in the rings to get by.
-* Through fighting, he picked up how to mimic certain accents. Some say his Bitran accent is flawless. He uses his accents as part of his disguise as he moves around the Reaches area.
+* Through fighting, he picked up how to mimic certain accents. Some say his Bitran and Bollian accent is flawless. He uses his accents as part of his disguise as he moves around the Reaches area.
-* Also made a living being a hired thug.
+* Also made a living being a hired thug and a conman.
-* Served 2 years in the Crom mines for deadly assault with his fists. Banned from the rings under threat of serving a longer sentence.
+* Served 2 years in the Crom mines for deadly assault with his fists that resulted in a death. Banned from the rings under threat of serving a longer sentence.
 * Found Greenfields and was taken in by the age of 20, freshly out from the mines. Lanvec decided quickly his talents would have better use serving at High Reaches Weyr a turn later.
 * Secured his own ride to High Reaches Weyr through brownrider L'rok - an old Bitran buddy he met turns ago while fighting. It was evidently as a message to Greenfields that he does things ''his'' way, not theirs.
-* Currently has only a slight connection to Jo's Greenfields crew. They're aware of each other, but ''wary'' of each other.
+* Currently has only a slight connection to Jo's Greenfields crew. They're aware of each other, but ''wary'' of each other. This wariness has since improved post-Impression.
 = Relationships =
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 *[[Pia]]: "Young. Far too bubbly."<br>
 *[[S'rin]]: "You don't rock the boat."<br>
-*[[Silva]]: "Too young."<br>
+*[[Silva]]: "Too young. Too bitchy ''so'' young."<br>
 *[[Torlynna]]: "Are you as sharp as you appear?"<br>
 *[[V'ret]]: "She's disappointed, I can tell, but I wasn't surprised."<br>

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 * '''Lanvec:''' "I'll call you 'boss', but don't mistake my gratitude for servitude. I ain't like these other bulbs you have running around for you."<br>
 * [[Taikrin]]: "Big, Baddie Taikrin. Heh, yeah, I've heard alllll about you. How the mighty have fallen, eh? I'll make sure I won't make the same mistakes YOU did."<br>
-* [[Jo]]: "Guess you're the one I've gotta kow-tow to around here. Grow a dick first."<br>
+* [[Jo]]: "Guess you and I are in this for the long haul. I know what I want. Trust that it's the same thing the Family does."<br>
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 *[[N'klas]]: "Weyrleader's kid. You're alright with me."<br>
 *[[L'ton]]: "Another bronzerider."<br>
-*[[Lys]]: "Girl hiding love letters on cliffs. What else are you hiding?"<br>
+*[[Lys]]: "Dare I say....we could be ''friends''?"<br>
 *[[Pia]]: "Young. Far too bubbly."<br>
 *[[S'rin]]: "You don't rock the boat."<br>
 *[[Silva]]: "Too young."<br>
 *[[Torlynna]]: "Are you as sharp as you appear?"<br>
-*[[V'ret]]: "We made it.  Now the real fun begins."<br>
+*[[V'ret]]: "She's disappointed, I can tell, but I wasn't surprised."<br>
 '''Others'''
 *[[H'vier]]: "Sorry you died, man. You seemed alright."<br>
 *[[Edyis]]: "Curious brownrider. Nice."<br>
-*[[Quinlys]]: "Hot redhead. Weyrlingmaster, too? I could be your best student."<br>
+*[[Telavi]]: "You're a sweetheart."<br>
-*[[Farideh]]: "Weyrwoman. You're not as prickly as you think you are."<br>
-*[[Faryn]]: "Hot. Wish you hadn't left."<br>
-*[[Jadzia]]: "Hot, nice and can kiss."<br>
-*[[Ulyana]]: "Your dragon...Well, I'm interested in what you've got to say."<br>

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 {{Icons}}
 |birthplace=Crom Area (Holdless)
-|playedby=Luke Rockold
+|playedby=Luke Rockhold
 }}
 {{Character-Categories
 |Categories=Convicts, High Reaches Area, Crom, High Reaches Weyr, Bitra Hold
 }}

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	\|Categories=Convicts, High Reaches Area, Crom, High Reaches Weyr, Bitra Hold		\|Categories=Convicts, High Reaches Area, Crom, High Reaches Weyr, Bitra Hold
	}}		}}
−	~~=Home=~~

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-'''Fellow Candidates'''
+'''Fellow Weyrlings'''
-*[[Nikalas]]: "Weyrleader's kid. You're alright with me."<br>
+*[[Ellerey]]: "We're the only ones whose dragons are....."<br>
-*[[Faryn]]: "Hot. The scowl turns me on."<br>
+*[[Jocelyn]]: "Frigid. Wonder what a smile looks like on you."<br>
-*[[Lycinea]]: "Girl hiding love letters on cliffs. What else are you hiding?"<br>
+*[[N'klas]]: "Weyrleader's kid. You're alright with me."<br>
-*[[Silva]]: "Sweet little girl. Lives in her own world."<br>
+*[[L'ton]]: "Another bronzerider."<br>
 *[[Torlynna]]: "Are you as sharp as you appear?"<br>
-*[[Everett]]: "Fellow transplant. Hoping one of us, or both, succeed. Eye on the prize."<br>
+*[[V'ret]]: "We made it.  Now the real fun begins."<br>
 '''Others'''
 *[[Quinlys]]: "Hot redhead. Weyrlingmaster, too? I could be your best student."<br>
 *[[Farideh]]: "Weyrwoman. You're not as prickly as you think you are."<br>

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 = Relationships =
-'''Family'''
+'''Old Family'''
 * '''Aunt Kayla:''' "I know you did all you could for me, despite everything. I know you still believe in me. I wish I could be the man you always said you'd see in me. But I'm not him."<br>