Z'kiel - Revision history

Weylaughn at 02:17, 26 October 2015

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Weylaughn at 00:23, 30 July 2015

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 On the 21st day of the 13th month of turn 38, Ahtzudaeth Searches [[Torlynna]].
 =Relationships=
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 [[Alida]] - You can teach me. I can give you jerky.  Not sure if that's a fair trade. <br>
 [[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.<br>
-[[Jocelyn]] - He sees something in you.  Do not disappoint him.<br>
+[[Jocelyn]] - He saw something in you.  So did ''she''.  Do not disappoint them.<br>
-[[Torlynna]] - We will see how well you do.
+[[Torlynna]] - He is happy with your energy - and hers.  It is as it should be.<br>
 == Igen Weyr ==
-Kasdeja - The rest of the blood might have dried up - but you remain.  Thank you.
+Kasdeja - The rest of the blood might have dried up - but you remain.  Thank you.<br>
 == Fort Weyr ==
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 {{Icons}}
-|position=Weyrling
+|position=Bronzerider
 |where=High Reaches Weyr
-|Has rank=Weyrling
+|Has rank=Dragonrider
 |dragon=Fire-Born Vanguard Bronze Ahtzudaeth
 |birthplace=Igen Weyr

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 On the 28th day of the 12th month of turn 38, Ahtzudaeth makes his first Search: [[Jocelyn]].
 =Relationships=
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 [[Alida]] - You can teach me. I can give you jerky.  Not sure if that's a fair trade. <br>
 [[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.<br>
-[[Jocelyn]] - He sees something in you.  Do not disappoint him.
+[[Jocelyn]] - He sees something in you.  Do not disappoint him.<br>
 == Igen Weyr ==
 Kasdeja - The rest of the blood might have dried up - but you remain.  Thank you.
 =Family=

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	{{ProfileTabs		{{ProfileTabs
	\|picture=Ethan rains zadkiel.jpg		\|picture=Ethan rains zadkiel.jpg

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-=home=
+=Home=
 {{ProfileTabs
 |picture=Ethan rains zadkiel.jpg
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 On the 23rd day of the 11th month of turn 38, he Impressed a bronze firelizard (or: Ahtzudaeth acquires a minion)
 =Relationships=
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 [[Irianke]] - ''grunt''<br>
 [[T'mic]] - Hit ''harder''.<br>
-[[Faryn]] - Talk and I will listen.<br>
+[[Faryn]] - Talk and I will listen.  ... and, maybe, I will smile.<br>
-[[Alida]] - You can teach me. I can give you jerky.  Not sure if that's a fair trade.
+[[Alida]] - You can teach me. I can give you jerky.  Not sure if that's a fair trade. <br>
-[[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.
+[[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.<br>
 == Igen Weyr ==

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 =Relationships=
 Ahtzudaeth - I do not know what you were truly looking for - but I will do my best.<br>
 [[Farideh]] - Perhaps the curse of this Weyr will be lifted under your presence.  Perhaps.<br>
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 [[Alida]] - You can teach me. I can give you jerky.  Not sure if that's a fair trade.
 [[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.
 =Brazen=

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-{{Profile
+=home=
 |picture=Ethan rains zadkiel.jpg
 |mother=Iekila (+22)
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 {{wysk}}
-== History ==
+=Ahtzudaeth=
 His line starts - and, presumably, will end - at Igen Weyr.  His mother was a cook; his father a hunter.  His grandfather was also a hunter.  And so on down the line.  It's unclear how many generations of his family have been at Igen Weyr, but it may well have been from the very beginning.
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 On the 23rd day of the 11th month of turn 38, he Impressed a bronze firelizard (or: Ahtzudaeth acquires a minion)
-== Relationships ==
+=Relationships=
 Ahtzudaeth - I do not know what you were truly looking for - but I will do my best.<br>
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 [[Jo]] - You're dangerous - but not like me.
-== Son of Autumn's Misfortune Bronze Firelizard ==
+=Brazen=
-''Bronze Brazen (aka: Zen)''
+''Son of Autumn's Misfortune Bronze Brazen (aka: Zen, Cry Baby)''
 Why the long face? He's a chiselled, grand fellow, an incarnation of autumn's blazing colors: golden sunlight, scarlet leaves, pumpkin-copper, and cinnamon spice streaked broadly over the greater background of a typically-bronze hide at headknobs, over wings and upon back and flanks. There's something almost sad about his features, though; a small and natural down-turn of mouth at corners plus a certain canting of headknobs and eye ridges that lends him the aire of silent, habitual melancholy. No doubt that oddly tear-shaped blotch of palest-bronze just beneath his left eye adds to the mystery of his apparent presence, as well, though he holds his lanky body upright.
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 Hatched: 23.11.38.I10
-== RP Logs ==
+=RP Logs=
 {{NewLogs |name={{BASEPAGENAME}}}}
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 |Categories=Greater Pern, High Reaches Area, High Reaches Weyr, Igen Area, Igen Weyr, Riders, Bronzeriders
 }}
 [[Category:Characters]]
 [[Category:Greater_Pern]]
 [[Category:High_Reaches_Area]]
 [[Category:High_Reaches_Weyr]]

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 Why the long face? He's a chiselled, grand fellow, an incarnation of autumn's blazing colors: golden sunlight, scarlet leaves, pumpkin-copper, and cinnamon spice streaked broadly over the greater background of a typically-bronze hide at headknobs, over wings and upon back and flanks. There's something almost sad about his features, though; a small and natural down-turn of mouth at corners plus a certain canting of headknobs and eye ridges that lends him the aire of silent, habitual melancholy. No doubt that oddly tear-shaped blotch of palest-bronze just beneath his left eye adds to the mystery of his apparent presence, as well, though he holds his lanky body upright.
-Dam: Alida's Pyrite
+Dam: Alida's Pyrite<br>
-Sire: Jo's Mime
+Sire: Jo's Mime<br>
 Hatched: 23.11.38.I10

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	His clothing is roughly appropriate for the warmer weather at the 'Reaches - typically a combination of wherhide pants with a matching, and elaborately painted, vest. In cooler weather, a hooded cloak is worn. A brightly colored sash - and matching kerchief - are also worn. In all cases, boots are worn only when sandals simply aren't appropriate. He's rarely seen without the tools of his trade - a bow and quiver full of arrows - and rarer still seen without a knife somewhere on his person. The knot of a 'Reachian weyrling - threaded with bronze - claims his shoulder.		His clothing is roughly appropriate for the warmer weather at the 'Reaches - typically a combination of wherhide pants with a matching, and elaborately painted, vest. In cooler weather, a hooded cloak is worn. A brightly colored sash - and matching kerchief - are also worn. In all cases, boots are worn only when sandals simply aren't appropriate. He's rarely seen without the tools of his trade - a bow and quiver full of arrows - and rarer still seen without a knife somewhere on his person. The knot of a 'Reachian weyrling - threaded with bronze - claims his shoulder.
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	{{wysk}}		{{wysk}}