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K'zin (K'zin (talk)) left a comment on Tue, 29 Oct 2013 05:55:10 GMT.

<comment date="2013-10-29T05:55:10Z" name="K'zin" signature="K&#39;zin (talk)"> I'm trying (seriously!) to get better with my comments. My first instinct is to just gush about how much I loved this scene (because I did; I felt like I was reading a passage from a novel and got to the end and was disgruntled because there wasn't more). But toward the goal of being a better comment-maker, I specifically really enjoyed seeing a scene from Rone's army on the whole; it helps fill in a lot of blanks. I really loved Butters. I think the thing I enjoyed most was the flow and back and forthing with the use of the NPCs; it all knit together and seemed very 'real' to me. Which brings me back to <3ing a shameful amount. </comment>