Logs talk:Payout.
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Nicky (Nicky (talk)) left a comment on Sat, 11 May 2013 20:04:12 GMT.
< I love this vignette. It's so touching, and so sad at the end. I feel for E'sren.
Well written.
Azaylia (Dragonshy (talk)) left a comment on Sat, 11 May 2013 21:15:34 GMT.
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I love getting to read about E'sren-- his feelings and his past. He's so good about smiling in his day to day interactions, which keeps his feelings under wraps.
It's fantastic what you've done with E'sren's family, with how close they are. The payout was an amazing touch, and just fit given what E'sren's Impression means coupled with his mother's business-like view of the world. It's all really touching. <3 Great stuff!